I really enjoy the starts of 2,3,4,6,8 and 9. While I truly hope you choose to go back into #2, the way you began to use the material in 3 has some really interesting possibilities and to take that further while readdressing the observation part of it could be very powerful. #6 also has a dramatic perspective and sense of light if you really wanted to exaggerate the shadows and form that could be nice to. Keep it up & keep drawing from observation as much as possible!
Adjust the lighting on the photographs. They seem like they were taken in a very dark room. Work on creating a respresentation of depth/form in your classworks.
I really like your shoe piece. The way that you colored the jeans really show the denim texture to the jeans. Also the fact that you put the notes on the shoe laces made the piece really original. I really like your ideas.
I really enjoy the starts of 2,3,4,6,8 and 9. While I truly hope you choose to go back into #2, the way you began to use the material in 3 has some really interesting possibilities and to take that further while readdressing the observation part of it could be very powerful. #6 also has a dramatic perspective and sense of light if you really wanted to exaggerate the shadows and form that could be nice to. Keep it up & keep drawing from observation as much as possible!
ReplyDeleteAdjust the lighting on the photographs. They seem like they were taken in a very dark room. Work on creating a respresentation of depth/form in your classworks.
ReplyDeleteI really like your shoe piece. The way that you colored the jeans really show the denim texture to the jeans. Also the fact that you put the notes on the shoe laces made the piece really original. I really like your ideas.
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